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When Io, a simple girl of the barren Northern steppes, is summoned to the great city of the Goddess, she doesn't know what to expect. There she meets Kymera, a lusty and headstrong young priestess, and learns that she alone may have the power to revive a dying realm, but only if she can help Kymera become the perfect vessel of the Goddess's abundance.
I would be remiss in posting this story here without giving due credit to the work of art which originally inspired it, Axof's Twelve More Inches, [link] My story ended up being a lot different than the scene he depicted, but without the sight of those epic hips, I never would have started on this one.
Anyways then, this one is my first real try at writing in a fantasy setting, so any comments, approving or otherwise, would, as always, be most appreciated.
I would be remiss in posting this story here without giving due credit to the work of art which originally inspired it, Axof's Twelve More Inches, [link] My story ended up being a lot different than the scene he depicted, but without the sight of those epic hips, I never would have started on this one.
Anyways then, this one is my first real try at writing in a fantasy setting, so any comments, approving or otherwise, would, as always, be most appreciated.
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I now see why you were wondering about the idea of writing something in a fantasy setting- there's a lot of world-building that you had to do in order for it to make sense.
It makes the story get off to a slightly slower start, though I'm not sure how you could have gotten around that. But once it gets rolling, it does so with the usual amount of fun stuff. I liked the in-world explanations of the need for excessively expanded women, and though I personally am not a huge fan of immobility, the climax of the story does not fail to please- the overall tension of the scene as she grows out of control, more so than in your other works, is especially exciting.
If Io had some adventures of her own as Kymera's herald, I would be interested in seeing them.
It makes the story get off to a slightly slower start, though I'm not sure how you could have gotten around that. But once it gets rolling, it does so with the usual amount of fun stuff. I liked the in-world explanations of the need for excessively expanded women, and though I personally am not a huge fan of immobility, the climax of the story does not fail to please- the overall tension of the scene as she grows out of control, more so than in your other works, is especially exciting.
If Io had some adventures of her own as Kymera's herald, I would be interested in seeing them.